Me and my brother

We are in foster care. We have lived with our foster carers for 3 years and we are staying until we are adults. We go on holidays and days out. I go swimming. I go to rainbows and it is very fun. I love my foster carers because they give me lots of love and teach me the rights and wrongs.

The final sentence is powerful and shows how much the writer values their foster carers and what they do. A great way to end the piece of writing.
Dan Worsley